I like the video, but the quote at the end seems corny and I think you can do better.
when the training is done by myself and my partner who have lost 106 kilograms combined i think we're allowed to use that motto unless you can give me something better.
when the training is done by myself and my partner who have lost 106 kilograms combined i think we're allowed to use that motto unless you can give me something better.
What about
"Dedicating Our Lives To Helping You Change Yours" or something?
when the training is done by myself and my partner who have lost 106 kilograms combined i think we're allowed to use that motto unless you can give me something better.
The stuff you do in the video is awesome and your training looks great, I might steal some of it for the kids I coach.
I'm just saying that a bunch of companies and products use those words, for example medication or hair gainer, "bla bla bla.... it will change your life".
An example of somebody who marketed their product well is Tony Horton with P90X. The name, added with a short program discription like:
"P90X, Power 90, 10-Minute Trainer"
It's different and kind of aggressive. You want to create curiosity about your product, perhaps if you have a structured time table for your programs you could go something like "10 days 10 pounds". Maybe that's bad though I don't know.
Perhaps if you know anybody in marketing you should ask for their opinion, I just watch Mad Men
The stuff you do in the video is awesome and your training looks great, I might steal some of it for the kids I coach.
I'm just saying that a bunch of companies and products use those words, for example medication or hair gainer, "bla bla bla.... it will change your life".
An example of somebody who marketed their product well is Tony Horton with P90X. The name, added with a short program discription like:
"P90X, Power 90, 10-Minute Trainer"
It's different and kind of aggressive. You want to create curiosity about your product, perhaps if you have a structured time table for your programs you could go something like "10 days 10 pounds". Maybe that's bad though I don't know.
Perhaps if you know anybody in marketing you should ask for their opinion, I just watch Mad Men
the curiosity about the product usually helps though, it creates a phone call getting them in for a pre-screening and potentially signing up.
If you leave everything on the table for them to know then they're not as interested, they don't ask about your secret or anything else.
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