listen (fire)

[ace23]

https://soundcloud.com/slihmm/slihmm...ance-schreiber

[ace23]

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[DonDadda59]

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Now THAT was a rapster song.

[macmac]

Nice track. your voice is good, I feel like you need more presence at the end of your bars, maybe cuz you lose a bit of breath you tend to trail off or mumble when you should emphasize the rhyme. Examples: why would I trust them, low on stacks..., three fifth humans. Those came off mediocre.

Good pronunciation on the multi syllables. Lyrics were pretty good, liked the Booth line and from there your flow was nice, how you switched it up.

"Put your hand upon my mic, you might get introduced to Christ..." Had an Outkast vibe to it

Good job, you definitely got a lot better

[ROCSteady]

Your hobby has birthed some ripe fruit this time around.


Salutations

[ace23]

Cool bump

[ace23]

fwm

[ROCSteady]

It's always good to have a hobby bro.


Everyone needs an outlet

[ace23]

Yeah shit's great

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[Pushxx]

Other than sounding out of breath the whole time, that was pretty sick...beat included.

[ace23]

Other than sounding out of breath the whole time, that was pretty sick...beat included.

Thanks

[ace23]

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[Bosnian Sajo]

Pretty dope. Keep working, make an actual song with a hook. Easier said than done, I understand, but focus on that more than 1 minute snippets.

[ace23]

Pretty dope. Keep working, make an actual song with a hook. Easier said than done, I understand, but focus on that more than 1 minute snippets.

Cool

New: https://soundcloud.com/slihmm/slihmm-solo-prod-drwn