new bars for that ass

[ace23]

https://soundcloud.com/slihmm/slihmm...od-brothermoon

[Norcaliblunt]

Having orgies with Helen Keller and Ann Frank
Penn and Teller and that damn skank... Caitlyn Jenner
Picking Bilderburg warning a billion nerds
How we're about to be killed and served as Satan's dinner
Flogging my slong watching ya mom
Get DPed with Freddy and Jason in her
This acquired taste is bitter

[Lamar Doom]

Same critique I always have for you- you are a very good rapper, but there is nothing distinguishable about you as a unique individual. Spill your guts man, there's too many rappers out there, need to hear YOUR voice or you'll just be lost in the crowd. Why would it break your mother's heart to hear where your head is at? From the soul, you have the tools, gotta be fearless with your perspective.

[ace23]

Same critique I always have for you- you are a very good rapper, but there is nothing distinguishable about you as a unique individual. Spill your guts man, there's too many rappers out there, need to hear YOUR voice or you'll just be lost in the crowd. Why would it break your mother's heart to hear where your head is at? From the soul, you have the tools, gotta be fearless with your perspective.

Lol my life too boring for you bra sorry

[Lamar Doom]

Lol my life too boring for you bra sorry

No man, you can do this, I'm just trying to tell you what I think is preventing you from being able to do this for a living. You are the only guy that's ever posted raps on here that I think could get on. But I've heard the equivalent of "I used to play ball with a guy who's in jail, I don't give a f*ck" a million different ways. I wanna hear your shit and have some understanding of you as an individual, not just a good rapper brushing over themes I've heard before.

[navy]

Make a concept album(mixtape) about shit that never happened if you must and make sure the songs connect.

[ace23]

Make a concept album(mixtape) about shit that never happened if you must and make sure the songs connect.

Lol I can respect people who do that but I'm just I want to talk about myself not some character.

[Pushxx]

You have a smooth sound but need some varied inflection in some of your sentences. I'm not an Eminem fan but he is great at changing the flow and rhythm between sentences/verses and varies his tone sentence to sentence.

Hard to explain what I mean.

[nathanjizzle]

you are pretty mediocre.

[Bless Mathews]

Not bad.


Good last bOar

[ace23]

Thanks for the comments.

[ace23]

This heat af y'all sleep

[ace23]

1k bump

[ace23]

Bump

[red1]

pretty good bro. keep doing your thing