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Re: Magna Carter Holy Grail
Originally Posted by Quizno
Stop it.
I right wayy better lines than that, on a off day.
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Re: Magna Carter Holy Grail
Originally Posted by Goliath Uterus
Are you talking to him or me?
Talking to you about his post.
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Decent playground baller
Re: Magna Carter Holy Grail
I'm glad it sorta sucks though. suck is extreme, but its not a good album. sort of feel like Ye and Z should just produce. The young guns of Wale and Cole blew both of them out of the water. Phora's new album is active too.
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Biyombo Smash!!
Re: Magna Carter Holy Grail
Originally Posted by branslowski
Stop it.
I right wayy better lines than that, on a off day.
yeahhh except the only difference is that he's being serious
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Re: Magna Carter Holy Grail
Originally Posted by Quizno
yeahhh except the only difference is that he's being serious
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Re: Magna Carter Holy Grail
Originally Posted by branslowski
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You don't have millions of dollars is what he's saying.
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Biyombo Smash!!
Re: Magna Carter Holy Grail
Originally Posted by branslowski
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you may be able to rap about having money and being rich and powerful or whatever, but it's completely different to rap about it and live it. which is what makes it so much better imo
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Re: Magna Carter Holy Grail
oh wow, the album is so deep now... -_-
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Re: Magna Carter Holy Grail
Umm...I don't rap about having 1 million dollars, because I don't.
Soo, I'm still lost on wat u 2 posters are talking about...
Lyrics in rap I just finished writing this mornin:
"I'm a wild n!gga-u should face the facts,
sour deez on deck I'm bout to face da pack,
den I face da blunt-hit it front to back,
if u don't smoke it to da roach wat kinda fun is that?,
Man I rather run the rap before I run the trap,
cause wit every f*ckin trap is a f*ckin rat,
n wen a n!gga gettin cheese dey gone f*ckin snap,
now u headed up state man ya life a wrap,
wat kind of life is that?-I rather take a nap,
6 feet wit da dirt right beneath my back,"
no lies here...Doesnt this forum listen to rappers before the millions? Shame on yawl.
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Re: Magna Carter Holy Grail
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Re: Magna Carter Holy Grail
Originally Posted by branslowski
Umm...I don't rap about having 1 million dollars, because I don't.
Soo, I'm still lost on wat u 2 posters are talking about...
Lyrics in rap I just finished writing this mornin:
"I'm a wild n!gga-u should face the facts,
sour deez on deck I'm bout to face da pack,
den I face da blunt-hit it front to back,
if u don't smoke it to da roach wat kinda fun is that?,
Man I rather run the rap before I run the trap,
cause wit every f*ckin trap is a f*ckin rat,
n wen a n!gga gettin cheese dey gone f*ckin snap,
now u headed up state man ya life a wrap,
wat kind of life is that?-I rather take a nap,
6 feet wit da dirt right beneath my back,"
no lies here...Doesnt this forum listen to rappers before the millions? Shame on yawl.
You ain't saying nothing tho homie, you just puttin words together that rhyme.
You rhymed pack with back, that & trap. And then re used back a few lines down..
You're using the most basic elementary rhyme scheme "snap, rat, that, trap"
At this stage in your rhyming career I don't think you're ready to give Jay Z any tips on how to write a song.
Last edited by MastaKilla; 07-05-2013 at 03:07 PM.
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Sixers|Eagles|Phillies
Re: Magna Carter Holy Grail
Originally Posted by MastaKilla
You ain't saying nothing tho homie, you just puttin words together that rhyme.
You rhymed pack with back, that & trap. And then re used back a few lines down..
At this stage in your rhyming career I don't think you're ready to give Jay Z any tips on how to write a song.
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Biyombo Smash!!
Re: Magna Carter Holy Grail
Originally Posted by branslowski
Umm...I don't rap about having 1 million dollars, because I don't.
Soo, I'm still lost on wat u 2 posters are talking about...
Lyrics in rap I just finished writing this mornin:
"I'm a wild n!gga-u should face the facts,
sour deez on deck I'm bout to face da pack,
den I face da blunt-hit it front to back,
if u don't smoke it to da roach wat kinda fun is that?,
Man I rather run the rap before I run the trap,
cause wit every f*ckin trap is a f*ckin rat,
n wen a n!gga gettin cheese dey gone f*ckin snap,
now u headed up state man ya life a wrap,
wat kind of life is that?-I rather take a nap,
6 feet wit da dirt right beneath my back,"
no lies here...Doesnt this forum listen to rappers before the millions? Shame on yawl.
it's not about whether or not someone has millions, it's about rapping about real stuff. like if jay z has millions of dollars and he can rap about how much money he has and how he came up from nothing and has a great flow with it i'm gonna enjoy it. same thing about a poor ass rapper who's still trying to come up and raps about whatever struggles he's gone through etc. but they're almost two completely different genres. i wouldn't expect some new rap to rap about how famous and rich he is, and tbh if he did it'd be stupid. honestly i just like factual statements in rap that are delivered with swagger
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Good college starter
Re: Magna Carter Holy Grail
I like this album. I wouldn't put it in my top 5 Jay albums, but this was a good listen. Probably won't listen to half of these tracks again, or at least not regularly. That's what separates this from other albums, there are several Jay-Z albums that I can listen to top to bottom. This one is sort of tedious to get through.
Production quality is amazing though, and relative to what's out there these days, it will be one of the better albums this year (not a good thing imo). On a side note, F*ckWithMeYouKnowIGotIt has some of that classic Jay-Z word play. The Casino reference after the DeNiro line gave me a chuckle no lie.
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Re: Magna Carter Holy Grail
Originally Posted by branslowski
Umm...I don't rap about having 1 million dollars, because I don't.
Soo, I'm still lost on wat u 2 posters are talking about...
Lyrics in rap I just finished writing this mornin:
"I'm a wild n!gga-u should face the facts,
sour deez on deck I'm bout to face da pack,
den I face da blunt-hit it front to back,
if u don't smoke it to da roach wat kinda fun is that?,
Man I rather run the rap before I run the trap,
cause wit every f*ckin trap is a f*ckin rat,
n wen a n!gga gettin cheese dey gone f*ckin snap,
now u headed up state man ya life a wrap,
wat kind of life is that?-I rather take a nap,
6 feet wit da dirt right beneath my back,"
no lies here...Doesnt this forum listen to rappers before the millions? Shame on yawl.
Wtf, sh!t is ass bro. No punchlines or wordplay or any type of hot lines. U really think youre better than hov??
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